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manujmehta Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1147 W: 79 N: 2778] (12360) [2013-10-30 20:51]

Hello Jean
i like the depth of field here. very well balanced shot, though you choose to crop it square. light is subtle which gives the frame a balanced feel. nice place to shoot.
TFS

MM

manujmehta Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1147 W: 79 N: 2778] (12360) [2013-10-30 20:44]

hello Steve
i like the tone mapping applied here. details have been pulled very well. the sky should have been more opened i guess. the white halo on the top of the roofs are a bit distraction. rest is all well balanced :)
thanks for sharing

regards
MM

manujmehta Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1147 W: 79 N: 2778] (12360) [2013-10-30 20:33]

Hello Silvio
its an interesting structure as we don't often see this kind of architecture in India. can you clean the shadow from the right side to pull more details.

regards
Manuj

manujmehta Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1147 W: 79 N: 2778] (12360) [2012-12-30 21:42]

Nice light management Rew. Skin details are fine and reflector created a fine catchlights. Rew if possible clone that white hair (it seems that light was harsh there) at upper right corner. rest is all fine to me :)
tfs

manujmehta Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1147 W: 79 N: 2778] (12360) [2012-12-30 21:22]

Shades and highlights made this frame appealing. love the yellow. soft and harsh light made this image balanced. good capture

manujmehta Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1147 W: 79 N: 2778] (12360) [2012-12-30 21:07]

nice shot Ryszard. i like the light management here. i feel you can crop the headroom and the folds of the paper/cloth are clearly visible. can you clone them out?

manuj mehta

manujmehta Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1147 W: 79 N: 2778] (12360) [2012-12-21 1:30] [+]

dear raimundo i like the subject and the composition but i would bring your notice towards the colour cast. there is a huge colour cast in the frame. i have tried to correct the colour cast on this picture, if you allow i can show you as i could not find workshop option on this image.

manujmehta Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1147 W: 79 N: 2778] (12360) [2012-12-17 22:32] [+]

nice colour tones, very well capture the last breath of the day. very scenic. a peaceful and calm shot. reflections add life to the foreground.

manujmehta Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1147 W: 79 N: 2778] (12360) [2012-12-17 22:30]

very nice POV. nice model and nice use of shallow depth of field. well placed subject.

manujmehta Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1147 W: 79 N: 2778] (12360) [2012-12-17 20:49]

full marks to the editing here. i like the way you have treated this shot and get a creative output. the light has made this shot mysterious.