|Informacja o zdjęciu|
|Copyright: Jonathan Oldfield (trekjono) (126)|
|Data wykonania: 2007-11-03|
|Aparat: Nikon D-50|
|Naświetlenie: f/5.3, 1/500 sekund|
|More Photo Info: [view]|
|Wersja zdjęcia: Oryginalna wersja|
|Dodano: 2007-11-13 1:42|
|[Noty - Informator] Notatki Autora|
|Out cycling one evening and the setting sun poked out through the clouds giving a nice hue to everything.|
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Hi Jonathan, i am making a comment because there are quite a few points I see in this picture that could be improved a little.
- The background seems quite tilted which makes the picture a little distorted
- The subject of the photo seems to be this little plant in the front, yet it is cropped by the frame. Maybe I would have zoomed out a little in order to keep everything in.
- I would have opened aperture all the way to reduce the DOF because at 5.3, you are not going to have much of the background sharp enough anyway. This would depend on your lens though.
I am a beginner but I am writing this because I make similar mistakes and people in this forum and others pointed them out to me, which turned out to be great help for later shots.
- [2007-11-14 1:10]
Hi Jonathan, I don't think I have seen your photos before, so welcome to TL.
Jerome has given you a helpful critique, and that is the sort of critique that I learnt a lot from when I started posting photos here.
I agree with most of his suggestions, but not the 1st one, as I don't think the BG is tilted - but please do take note of the other points.